在這 電子郵件調優 課, 我們正在看吉米的一封電子郵件, 是他公司的培訓官. 吉米想通知即將召開的研討會的各個部門負責人，他們的員工將參加. 這是一封內部電子郵件, 通常，這比發送到公司外部的東西更加非正式. 然而, 它被發送給比Jimmy更高級別的經理, 所以語氣必須尊重並且不要太隨意.
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與 06 – 給高級經理的書面要求
在這 電子郵件調優 課, 我們正在看吉米的一封電子郵件, 是他公司的培訓官. 吉米想通知即將召開的研討會的各個部門負責人，他們的員工將參加. 這是一封內部電子郵件, 通常，這比發送到公司外部的東西更加非正式. 然而, 它被發送給比Jimmy更高級別的經理, 所以語氣必須尊重並且不要太隨意.
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I’s very good, I’m Italian and I don’t speak a good English but I understood it very well.
與-06 has helped me a lot to understand the better way to write a mail on business. But I’m still confuse on how I can make a email formal/informal and decisive/tentative. I wonder if you can help me to explaint more about modal verbs/words in order to understand how I can be more or less polite and change the tone on a email.
@ Alejandro,
You raise an excellent point: How to vary the tone in English? As you mention, the use of modals verbs is key to varying tone but there are also other techniques that come into play. I think this is a topic we need to look at in detail for both written and spoken English, so expect to see some lessons on tone in the new year.
Is it right to address to “department heads” or would it be better or also possible to write “heads of department”?
@Rapsak,
If you’re referring to the salutation (greeting), I would use “Department Heads”.
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I appreciate your assistance on this lecture.
I assume that the tone of e-mail on this business environment is very important.
I am looking forward to your more real business english lecture.
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Brilliant! Seriously, it really helped me a lot–maybe the best one of the Tune-Ups. 非常感謝!!!!
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