今日, 私たちは新しい英語のビデオシリーズを開始します 英語でメールを書く: メールチューンアップ
各動画には、メンバーからの実際のメールのレビューが掲載されています. メールの背景と内容を確認した後, 次に、次の記述に従って文章を分析することで、どのような改善ができるかを確認します。 3 主な基準:
1. 力学 – 文法, 句読点, メールのスペルとレイアウト.
2. スタイル – 語彙の使用と文の構成方法.
3. トーン – 全体的な印象, または感じ, テキストが作成します.
メールを確認して編集した後, あなたのライティングを改善するためのいくつかのヒントを検討し、それからあなたが練習できるようにライティングタスクで終わります.
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What a great idea !! おめでとう
I really enjoyed this “E-mail tune up”!!
It’s great! Hope to see more !
New Video podcast on business writing ,
I am very glad to you for your video and I hope for next.
This is exactly what I was looking for! This is a fantastic idea! Could you please add some more?
Regards,
Hi I love this idea ,
It would give me invaluable source of ideas to improve my business writing skills. I would like to see more video podcasts like this.
I really enjoyed this kind of exercise. しかしながら, I could not get acess to the answers as shown on the video. Can you help me with that?
Many thanks .
Ana
You can view the answer to the writing task here:
http://www.businessenglishpod.com/learningcenter2/2008/04/28/email-tune-up-01-example-answer-for-writing-task-1/
The answer is also in the free study notes available here (‘right-click to download the PDF):
http://www.businessenglishpod.com/FREEsamples/ET01SN.pdf
We haven’t included a writing task in the latest videos but we’ll consider putting them back in if people are interested.
Peter
This video is part of my English lecture.
It is definitely a great source for English teachers as well as for language learners. All the materials chosen from learners themselves are authentic and meaningful. The analysis based on the three main criteria is also clear and helpful. Very good job, indeed! Thank you!
It’s great