Hoje, estamos lançando uma nova série de vídeos em inglês no escrevendo emails em ingles: Ajuste de e-mail
Cada vídeo apresentará uma revisão de um e-mail da vida real de um de nossos membros. Depois de revisar o plano de fundo e o conteúdo do email, veremos quais melhorias podemos fazer analisando a redação de acordo com 3 critérios principais:
1. Mecânica – a gramática, pontuação, ortografia e layout do e-mail.
2. Estilo – o uso de vocabulário e a forma como as frases são estruturadas.
3. Tom – a impressão geral, ou sentimento, o texto cria.
Depois de revisar e editar o e-mail, veremos algumas dicas para melhorar sua escrita e, em seguida, terminaremos com uma tarefa de redação para que você possa praticar.
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What a great idea !! Parabéns
I really enjoyed this “E-mail tune up”!!
It’s great! Hope to see more !
New Video podcast on business writing ,
I am very glad to you for your video and I hope for next.
This is exactly what I was looking for! This is a fantastic idea! Could you please add some more?
Regards,
Hi I love this idea ,
It would give me invaluable source of ideas to improve my business writing skills. I would like to see more video podcasts like this.
I really enjoyed this kind of exercise. No entanto, I could not get acess to the answers as shown on the video. Can you help me with that?
Many thanks .
Ana
You can view the answer to the writing task here:
https://www.businessenglishpod.com/learningcenter2/2008/04/28/email-tune-up-01-example-answer-for-writing-task-1/
The answer is also in the free study notes available here (‘right-click to download the PDF):
https://www.businessenglishpod.com/FREEsamples/ET01SN.pdf
We haven’t included a writing task in the latest videos but we’ll consider putting them back in if people are interested.
Peter
This video is part of my English lecture.
It is definitely a great source for English teachers as well as for language learners. All the materials chosen from learners themselves are authentic and meaningful. The analysis based on the three main criteria is also clear and helpful. Very good job, indeed! Obrigado!
It’s great