电子邮件调优 02 – ESL商业写作视频

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这是我们新视频系列中的第二少: 电子邮件调优. 在今天的英语视频中,我们研究了一种非常常见的电子邮件类型 – 请求对文档进行反馈.

每节视频课程均包含对我们一位成员的真实电子邮件的评论. 查看电子邮件的背景和内容之后, 然后,我们将通过分析以下内容来了解​​我们可以做出哪些改进: 3 主要标准: 机械师, 风格和语气.

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4 thoughts on “Email Tune-up 02 – ESL商业写作视频”

  1. Great work. This is what I was searching for. a real time trainner with fool proof tips to behave in a bussiness environment

    HATS OFF….

  2. Great job overall. 但…… never ever lose sight of the fact that every piece of material,examples etc. should be strongly connected or,even better, directly taken from real life situations! That way, you produce the absolutely best results for your audience. I have to mention this explicitly because a number of other sites semm to be lacking this quality.

  3. 是, this is an important point. All the emails we use for Email Tune-up are original examples from actual listeners. The only information we have changed are the names and any other information that might identify the company.

    As a rule, we base all our podcast scenarios on real life examples (yes, that even includes bizarre situations like selling mining equipment to Chinese engineers in a railway tunnelthe chap that wrote that script actually spent Christmas day in the said railway tunnel!).

    Many of these examples come from our personal experiences and others are drawn from situations that learners have experienced. We welcome all suggestions from listeners, so please feel welcome to share your ideas.
    Peter

  4. 你好 – I’ve come across your site and have really enjoyed the lessons. I am curious about one of the corrections (or lack thereof) made to the e-mail in this video. The e-mail starts withI should be glad if…” Why was no correction made to change/remove the wordshould”? Starting the sentence, “I would be glad if…” 要么 “I’d be glad if…” is correct. “I should…” indicates a suggestion or advice one would give to themselves and doesn’t not signal a request or desire for action from others.

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