今天, 我们将在 用英语写电子邮件: 电子邮件调优
每个视频都将包含来自我们一位成员的真实电子邮件的评论. 查看电子邮件的背景和内容之后, 然后，我们将通过分析以下内容来了解我们可以做出哪些改进： 3 主要标准:
1. 机械学 – 语法, 标点, 电子邮件的拼写和布局.
2. 样式 – 词汇的使用和句子的结构方式.
3. 音 – 总体印象, 或感觉, 文字创造.
查看和编辑电子邮件后, 我们将介绍一些改善写作的技巧，然后完成写作任务，以便您练习.
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What a great idea !! 恭喜
I really enjoyed this “E-mail tune up”!!
It’s great! Hope to see more !
New Video podcast on business writing ,
I am very glad to you for your video and I hope for next.
This is exactly what I was looking for! This is a fantastic idea! Could you please add some more?
Regards,
Hi I love this idea ,
It would give me invaluable source of ideas to improve my business writing skills. I would like to see more video podcasts like this.
I really enjoyed this kind of exercise. 然而, I could not get acess to the answers as shown on the video. Can you help me with that?
Many thanks .
Ana
You can view the answer to the writing task here:
http://www.businessenglishpod.com/learningcenter2/2008/04/28/email-tune-up-01-example-answer-for-writing-task-1/
The answer is also in the free study notes available here (‘right-click to download the PDF):
http://www.businessenglishpod.com/FREEsamples/ET01SN.pdf
We haven’t included a writing task in the latest videos but we’ll consider putting them back in if people are interested.
彼得
This video is part of my English lecture.
It is definitely a great source for English teachers as well as for language learners. All the materials chosen from learners themselves are authentic and meaningful. The analysis based on the three main criteria is also clear and helpful. Very good job, indeed! 谢谢!
It’s great