電子郵件調優 02 – ESL商業寫作視頻

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這是我們新視頻系列中的第二少: 電子郵件調優. 在今天的英語視頻中,我們研究了一種非常常見的電子郵件類型 – 請求對文檔進行反饋.

每節視頻課程均包含對我們一位成員的真實電子郵件的評論. 查看電子郵件的背景和內容之後, 然後,我們將通過分析以下內容來了解我們可以做出哪些改進: 3 主要標準: 機械師, 風格和語氣.

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4 thoughts on “Email Tune-up 02 – ESL商業寫作視頻”

  1. Great work. This is what I was searching for. a real time trainner with fool proof tips to behave in a bussiness environment

    HATS OFF….

  2. Great job overall. 但…… never ever lose sight of the fact that every piece of material,examples etc. should be strongly connected or,even better, directly taken from real life situations! That way, you produce the absolutely best results for your audience. I have to mention this explicitly because a number of other sites semm to be lacking this quality.

  3. 是, this is an important point. All the emails we use for Email Tune-up are original examples from actual listeners. The only information we have changed are the names and any other information that might identify the company.

    As a rule, we base all our podcast scenarios on real life examples (yes, that even includes bizarre situations like selling mining equipment to Chinese engineers in a railway tunnelthe chap that wrote that script actually spent Christmas day in the said railway tunnel!).

    Many of these examples come from our personal experiences and others are drawn from situations that learners have experienced. We welcome all suggestions from listeners, so please feel welcome to share your ideas.
    Peter

  4. 你好 – I’ve come across your site and have really enjoyed the lessons. I am curious about one of the corrections (or lack thereof) made to the e-mail in this video. The e-mail starts withI should be glad if…” Why was no correction made to change/remove the wordshould”? Starting the sentence, “I would be glad if…” 要么 “I’d be glad if…” is correct. “I should…” indicates a suggestion or advice one would give to themselves and doesn’t not signal a request or desire for action from others.

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