Aujourd'hui, nous lançons une nouvelle série de vidéos en anglais sur rédiger des e-mails en anglais: Optimisation des e-mails
Chaque vidéo présentera un examen d'un courriel réel d'un de nos membres. Après avoir examiné l'arrière-plan et le contenu de l'e-mail, nous verrons ensuite quelles améliorations nous pouvons apporter en analysant l'écriture selon 3 critères principaux:
1. Mécanique – la grammaire, ponctuation, orthographe et mise en page de l'e-mail.
2. Style – l'utilisation du vocabulaire et la structure des phrases.
3. Ton – l'impression générale, ou ressentir, le texte crée.
Après avoir examiné et modifié l'e-mail, nous allons passer en revue quelques conseils pour améliorer votre écriture, puis nous terminerons par une tâche d'écriture afin que vous puissiez vous entraîner.
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What a great idea !! Toutes nos félicitations
I really enjoyed this “E-mail tune up”!!
It’s great! Hope to see more !
New Video podcast on business writing ,
I am very glad to you for your video and I hope for next.
This is exactly what I was looking for! This is a fantastic idea! Could you please add some more?
Regards,
Hi I love this idea ,
It would give me invaluable source of ideas to improve my business writing skills. I would like to see more video podcasts like this.
I really enjoyed this kind of exercise. toutefois, I could not get acess to the answers as shown on the video. Can you help me with that?
Many thanks .
Ana
You can view the answer to the writing task here:
http://www.businessenglishpod.com/learningcenter2/2008/04/28/email-tune-up-01-example-answer-for-writing-task-1/
The answer is also in the free study notes available here (‘right-click to download the PDF):
http://www.businessenglishpod.com/FREEsamples/ET01SN.pdf
We haven’t included a writing task in the latest videos but we’ll consider putting them back in if people are interested.
Peter
This video is part of my English lecture.
It is definitely a great source for English teachers as well as for language learners. All the materials chosen from learners themselves are authentic and meaningful. The analysis based on the three main criteria is also clear and helpful. Very good job, indeed! Je vous remercie!
It’s great